The hiden door.

Today we were making a story about a hiden door.

There was once a normal day when people out shoping, out on picknicks,out playing games and inside watching tv and other stuff. But then 100s of portals were opening up in the city. The portals were opening on the ground and in the sky. Zombies were coming out, skeletons were coming out and fly monsters were coming out. The town people were runing for there lives. Not even the police could stop the zombies, skeletons and the flying monsters. And as time went by more and more invaders were coming out of the portals. But then i thoght that if i went inside one of the portals i could be able to stop the invasion for ever. But it was going to be a dangeruse adventure so i brang my freinds Robert, Cohen, William p,Dylan  and Austin. We went to my house to get some wepons. Then we went into the portal. I hope we will make it out alive I siad. The other side of the portal had trillions of invaders so me Robert, Cohen,
William p,Dylan and Austin went back thrugh the portal back to the earth because we dident have the rite wepons. Then we went through the portal with real guns and iron swords and saw the king of the invaders. The king of the invaders was Harry the mighty goblin. Then as usual Dlyan got out his pasuka and killed him. And then me Robert, Cohen, William p, Dylan and Austin got out our miniguns and killed a lot of invaders. We were relly losing time.Solar flars were koming out of the portals.But then Dylan got out a giant granade and exploded all the invaders. It relly worked. All the invaders died because of the granade. Luckly none of the humans got killed or got injured.But Dylan got injured.We toke him to hospital so he could feal better. Then he got out of hospital and we went back to our houses to play.Dylan was a super hero.

I like my writing.

Have you made a story like this?