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Thursday, 5 September 2019

Narrative writing

We have been learning about writing narratives based on our environment. We have looked at what will happen to our environment if we don't stop pollution.


One day earth was all sunny and beautiful people were at the beach and at the playgrounds.But then everything changed the sun went gray, plants were dying, birds were falling to the ground,trees were on fire buildings were on fire even some firestorms were burning thing down, people were dying and the most dangerous thing that happened was the legendary pyroclastic flow 100s and 1000s of people were suddenly turning into pyroc. Pyroc is the strongest rock in the world.Not even a jack hammer or lava can break pyroc.T he first firestorm killed 23000 people and the first pyroclastic flow killed more than 100,000 people.After the first pyroclastic flow explosives were going off.People were not even safe in bunkers from the firestorms, explosives and pyroclastic flows.People were trapped by falling trees and falling pieces of buildings.Lots of people were getting injured and the ambulances were going to hospital and leaving hospital caring around 3 people at a time.But then a flash of light came from the sky and 100s of fly recycling trucks and flying fire trucks came to the the rescue.The flying fire trucks put out as much fire as they could and the flying recycling trucks picked up as much rubbish as the could.The flying trucks were losing so they liked a lever that they had never flicked before.Then one by one all the things that went wrong stopped and disappeared and all the broken though came back in the right shape and in the right place and all the killed people came back to life.Now the earth is safe and the people had fun and lived there own happy lives.

1 comment:

  1. Wow, Cooper what a fantastic piece of writing! I love the ideas that you have included, and especially the optimism that everything works out at the end of the story. Do you think that one day there will be flying fire trucks and flying recycling trucks? Maybe you could invent them!

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