Frozen
Hello i am cooper the captain
Of a ship. I live in a big hole
In the middle of the ocean.You are probably thinking how i get
To my ship from the big hole well i have an elevator witch can
Take me up to a walk way and I can walk to the ship.But then the
Ocean froze to ice and the ship can not go in the ice it will break
And being in a sinking ship is deadly so i put a thing on
The front of a ship.It breaks the ice so the ship doesn't sink.
Now i am traveling true the pacific ocean to get to a safer
Plays could new zealand but a giant tsunami was about to
Crash into the ship so I jumped into a rowing boat and rowed away
5 seconds before the giant tsunami crashed onto the ship and
Destroyed it.Then I was rowing to new zealand.Then i could see
The shaddose of new zealand so i started rowing faster and faster
Until i made i to new zealand then i started making a house
When I finished the house i decorated it.what a trip i said.
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