Every day many kids get addicted to
video games and can't stop.
Today I'm going to tell you why I think video
games are bad for you.
So firstly I'm going to talk about aggression.
Kids that are addicted to video games often get
Angry when they have to get off.
This causes the kid to get angry when
They don't get there way and sometimes turns them
Into a bully.
Secondly I'm going to be talking about addiction.
Everyday more and more kids get addicted to video games
Making them not stop or at least not want to stop and not get
Enough sleep or exersize.
Lastly, I'm going to be talking about not enough exercise.
Not getting enough exercise makes kids unhealthy and get
Bad illnesses.
No exercise makes kids get lazy and not want to move.
Sure, every once and a while you can play video games but make sure
To get enough exersize so you can stay healthy and live a nice life.
I really hope you liked my writing.
What do you think about video games?
Hi Cooper
ReplyDeleteThank you for sharing your writing about video games. I think you made some very relevant points and well done for using sequencing words (secondly).
Miss Hudson