Pages

Wednesday, 4 August 2021

Hunting

 Hunting


To: The queen 

Address: Buckingham palace,

London,

England.


My address:

23 racemall drive,

Papakura,

Auckland,

NZ



Every day many animals are being hunted for fun. This could cause extinction or 

becoming endangered.


My point is that we are hunting and

 killing life that was here before us.


My evidence: If you go into the forest, or jungle, etc.

There are no animals because they are either hiding or dead. 


We are dominating the earth.

We hunt for a living, for fun.

We are killing animal habitats.


All I'm asking is please ban hunting for just a bit.

Just to let animal numbers go up.

Then we can start hunting again.

:)



Do you like my writing?
Have you ever made a letter like this?

4 comments:

  1. hi cooper your writing is very good i think that your opinion is very we are losing animals fast and someone needs to do something about is. from slaine. my shift key doesn't work and i cant put on caps lock so that why there are no capitals

    ReplyDelete
  2. Hello Cooper.
    This is a very good piece of writing. The words you used really made me think. Just fix the title as it says Huting instead of Hunting.
    That's all.
    From Robert.

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. you are correct Robert it is spelt wrong

      Delete
    2. Cool Cooper good job in fixing it.

      Delete

Please structure your comments as follows:
Positive - Something done well
Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say
Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about